powershines | mother knows best

Rapunzel doesn't sleep well, and she does wind up wrapped up in her hair overnight like a golden-cocooned butterfly. She's still dozing fitfully when the sun comes up.

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hisowninvention

Vlad gives her a little tiny wave with one hand. Or as little and tiny as a wave can be from a hand that big.

And then Rolan exchanges greetings with the innkeeper, and hands back the key, and accepts an extra slice of bread for the road, and out they go.

From:

powershines

Rapunzel continues to be quiet on the walk.

From:

hisowninvention

Rolan is also quiet.

But, when he gets hungry again a little while later - "I think I'll have that bread now, do you want any?"

From:

powershines

"No, I'm not hungry."

From:

hisowninvention

"All right."

He nibbles while he walks.

From:

powershines

Rapunzel looks at scenery.

"What's it like in the city?"

From:

hisowninvention

"Lots of buildings, on a hill, on an island, in a lake, across a huge stone bridge. With the palace on top of it all. You'll get a good look at it when we get closer. I think it's pretty. And there'll be people all over the place, just walking around."

From:

powershines

"Lots of them?"

From:

hisowninvention

"Depending where we go, yeah. I know the city pretty well, though, so if you want I'll keep to places where it's just a few and not lead you through any markets or anything."

From:

powershines

"Yes please."

From:

hisowninvention

"All right."

From:

powershines

"You're so helpful."

From:

hisowninvention

"I like you, I want to help you."

From:

powershines

"Why do you like me?" wonders Rapunzel thoughtfully.

From:

hisowninvention

"Huh. I don't know exactly," he says. "It's not the sort of thing I think about in terms of reasons. I just like you because... you're you. I guess some of it is how you reminded me of me, with the situation you're in, and some of it is that you're just - cute, nice to talk to."

From:

powershines

"Can you elaborate on all of that? I'm not trying to fish for compliments, I just literally do not know how to be around people and I want to - borrow your comparative expertise."

From:

hisowninvention

"Yeah. Well - the kinds of things that will get me to like someone and the kinds of things that will get people in general to like someone aren't always closely related. I think most people aren't going to see themselves in somebody who was raised by terrible people and lied to and scared of a lot of things, but people do sometimes like people they see themselves in, if they're seeing a part of themselves they like or feel sympathetic about. Vlad liked you because you're shy and he's also shy."

From:

powershines

"Would he not like me anymore if I stopped being shy?"

From:

hisowninvention

"That's usually not how it works - once somebody starts to like someone, they only tend to stop if they have a reason to stop. So he might not like you anymore if you stopped being shy and started being obnoxious or something instead, but if you just stopped being shy, well, he already likes you and that's not enough to make him stop all by itself."

From:

powershines

"Okay. What makes me nice to talk to?"

From:

hisowninvention

"Mmm... hard to define. And it's more the kind of thing where even if I could pin down what it is for me, some of it wouldn't translate to other people. The parts that would - you're sensible, you're polite, you think things through. Sometimes you're funny."